Feelings poem

Australian zoo

Looks like vicious crocodiles lurking in muddy water.

Sounds like huge elephants stomping their dirty feet on the ground.

smells like gross stinkey animal

Jefferies Park

Looks like the brown ducks swimming in the pond.

Sounds like the happy people yelling and playing on the colourful ground.

Smells like the Mr Whippy ice-cream truck driving past the park.

Tastes like eating a yummy picnic on the fresh, green grass.

Feels like a cold wind blowing past your face.

By Kate

feelings poem

A sea in Akaroa

Looks like dolphins jumping in the seawater.

Sounds like waves crashing through caves.

Smells like sandy water in my nose.

Tastes like dusty sand in my mouth.

Feels like shivery water lying down on me.

By Miriam youn.

jellie park

Looks Like children zooming down colourful wet water slides and into the clear warter.

Sounds Like warm warter crashing into the sides of the slide.

Smells Like white steam floating up from the spa.

Tastes Like warm sausaugerolls from the swimming pool cafe.

Feels like warm water sliding along your skin

Feelings poem

Ohope

looks like people walking past hot steaming muddy pools.

Sounds like kids yelling and screaming on the beach.

Smells like stinky sulpher and rotten eggs.

Tastes like cold refreshing ice blocks melting in my mouth.

Feels like the hot sun burning my back.

By Grace

feelings poem

Melbourne zoo

Looks like
curious monkeys swinging on the long ropes.

Sounds like
screeching birds soaring in the air.

Smells like
old stinky animal dropping on rotting grass.

Tastes like
dirty dry dust in my mouth.

Feels like
patting soft furry horses.

By Lydia Fay.

felling poem

a cricket match

Looks like crowds

of people cheering

for a big  six.

Sounds like the clapping 

for Bendan McCulbm.

Smells like hot  tasty

chips dripping with

sauee. Tastes like deliuious

hot dogs with spicy sauce on top

feels like the hot wind in your

face.by liam

Feelings poems

Nandi
Looks like bula buses taking torists to holtals
sounds like pitter patter rain drops,falling onto trees
Smells like sowbay ice cream
Tasts like sweet cocnut
Feel like nice cold pools
By victoria morton

A rugby game

feelings poem
looks like excited rugby players running on the green grass.
sounds like lots of people cheering on the all blacks.
smells like bubbly tasty coke in my hand.
tastes like dirty grass flicking up in my mouth.
feels like my tired eyes starting to close.

gym

Tramperleaning , flipping , having fun at the gym.
Learn to be a great gymnast.
Lots of fun things to do !

sams cinquain

looks like peacefull  streets with quiet cars.                                                                                              sounds like crusing waves and exited 

AMI STAIDIUM

FELINGS POEM


Looks Like thousonds of people watching the game.
Sounds Like the loud music playing for the cheerleeders.
Smells Like peoples sweat on a hot day.
Tastes Like grass blowing into my mouth.
Feels Like the oval rugby ball that the rugby player kicked out.

Melbourn zoo

Feelings poem

Looks like curious monkeys swinging on the long ropes.
Sounds like screetching birds soaring in the air.
Smells like old stinky animal droppings on the grass

Gymnatics

I went to gym and we had four rtashin

gymnastics

jumping on  the tramp swinging on  the  bar balancing on  the beams  but  mostly  having  fun 

athiletics day

i was in the sprints and i like the sprints the best .my freind jay and jackson and george and liam they are all my freands

our room number

messy colourful
people laughing haveing fun
cool!

High jump

Hard metal 

long high scary

fun!

my bird feeder

away from predators
safe to land on
keeps food dry
predators can not get it

my bird feeder

My bird feeder has lots of food, it is safe, and dry.

sams cinquain

tiger

large,slim

furry,vicious,fast

kills hiyenas to eat

fierce

the tiger

the lemur

small,thin                                                                                                                                                             furry,stripy,brown                                                                                                                                              runs along the ground                                                                                                                                       michievious

the snake

LONG  SKINNY

GREEN,SLIMY,SCALY

SLITHERS  ALONG THE  GROUND

FIERCE

The Crocodile

long,low
spiky,scaly,green
floats in muddy water
FIERCE

cinquain poem

OWL.
WIDE,LONG.
FEATHERY,AMBITIOUS,STILL.
LIVES IN A TREE.
WISE.

The Chinchilla

Chinchilla
Small,chubby
Fuzzy,stripy,hairy
Nibbles on brown nuts
Lazy

cinquain

the panther 

large,long

black,fast,furry

prowls for its prey

fiece

cinquain

Giraffe.

Tall,skinny.

spotty,hairy,alert

eat leaves from trees.

friendly

my learning

I learnt how to... sketch using shapes one thing i liked was... the colour and the shade
by sarah

cinquain

Cat
small,skinny
brown,fluffy,sharp claws
walks along peoples fences.
friendly

cinquain

goat

large thick

white furry noisy

runs and butts horhs

mean

cinquain

monkey

long,wide

brown,noisy,cheeky

swings from the branchers

cinquain poem Lydia.

owl.
wide,long.
feathery,ambitious,still.
lives in a tree.
wise.

dolphin

dolphin

long,wide

friendly,cute,wet

friendly  to  swimming  humans

intellegent

The scorpian

Scorpian
Low,skinny
Dangerous,fast,scary
It stings with Its tail
Deadly

elmer

the patchwork

elephant was

coming to visit

 him he's late

said elmer

perhaps he's 

lost let's go

and look for him

by george

The puppy

puppy

Small,skinny

Cute,soft,fuzzy

Licks at people's faces

Friendly

cinquain

kiwi

fat small

brown feathery furry

eats worms night

shy

Photo Competition

Here is a really cool competition for EVERY child in the school. It is for Arts Week in week 8. If you want to view it in google docs, click here. Otherwise go through it within your blog here:

Cinquain poem

wolf
large, long
furry, brown, hairy
howls lowd at night.
vicious

Cinquain

Elephant

Huge wide

wrinkly, slow,grey has mud baths

friendly.

WELCOME FROM MISS CAMPBELL

Hello Room 16,

Congratulations! You are now in our blog page.

Make sure you give your blog a Title (see above in your post box).

Also, please make sure that you give your blog a Label with your name and topic (see below in your post box).

We will be learning more about how to add other features and edit our work as we go, and our first class blogs will be our published poems.

It is so exciting to be able to read each other's posts, I know I am looking forward to reading yours!